Contrast between the black line car, or the dark blue.. blends in better..
Moved the text up a little bit, so it was aligned with the square opposite..
Kinda looks like its just floating.. need to think about what stock its gonna be printed on..
Changed the font to palatino on the front.. maybe do the same inside.. this font looks quite friendly.. which would be the 'fake' feeling..
Different colour..
I felt that it was too boring.. looked at trying to make it look a bit busier..
Still don't feel that the font is right.. looked on dafont again for a serif font.. found Oldstyle..
Now its tooo busy..
I love the oldstyle font.. and.. just kinda realised.. cars.. is it relevant.. maybe suitcases...
(however these cards would be bought for people moving house/leaving work.. keep it neutral?)
Getting a bit bored.. well.. just want to work on something else..
Another card I am looking at are christmas cards, as christmas is seen as such a happy time of the year, when actually, people are depressed and couldn't be arsed with the holiday..
A quick idea for christmas card.. obviously needs more work..
Hide.. crappy christmas..
or
I think that the bottom works better.. where the 'cr' is hidden behind the 'h'.. rather than the other way round..
I don't like how the crappy is easily seen and spaced out.. do the same as inside... ?
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